10A- Elevator Pitch No. 1

Hi everyone! Below is the link to my elevator pitch regarding irritating employees in retail environments. Hope you like it!

I am open to feedback :)

 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eYD8eajzDtg

Comments

  1. Victoria MayFebruary 13, 2020 at 5:21 PM

    Brianna,
    I definitely think you have a great idea, here! It appeals nicely to my introverted tendencies. As a consumer, I would absolutely utilize this system. In regards to your elevator pitch, I think you did a great job conveying the facts and information. The only recommendation I would have for next time is to slow down a little bit. I think you will probably do this naturally next time anyway since you have now already done it once. Great job!

    Sincerely,
    Victoria May

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  2. SkylarFebruary 15, 2020 at 5:54 PM

    Hey Brianna, I think your idea is very clever and is something that many people would find useful. I've enjoyed seeing how your idea has progressed through posts and I feel this system has some potential. I know recording yourself can be intimidating, but you did a really nice job elaborating your ideas clearly and concisely. Great job.

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  3. John WestFebruary 17, 2020 at 1:38 AM

    Hi Brianna!
    Your pitch was really impressive, I loved how professional you made it to really resemble an investor meeting. Your excitement about the product was clearly displayed in your tone of voice, which is really beneficial because it shows that you're fully confident that the product is innovative and can be marketed profitably, presenting a convincing subtext to investors. Great work!

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  4. Veronica RosenbaumFebruary 17, 2020 at 9:21 AM

    Hi Brianna. I really love your idea, since I am one of the people who don't like being bothered by employees. However, you conveyed your idea in your pitch very well. You very clearly elaborated on your idea and were very passionate about it. You also stayed very professional during your pitch. You did a great job!

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  5. Jennifer FrigoFebruary 17, 2020 at 9:49 AM

    Hello Brianna,
    I liked your pitch, you looked really professional and confident with your idea. I see a great opportunity. As a shopper, I would completely use this framework. I know recording yourself can be scary, yet you did an extremely pleasant activity explaining your thoughts plainly and compactly. Extraordinary employment.

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